MODIFIER PROBLEMS (Kesalahan Penempatan Modifier / Penjelas)
Terkadang kita sering bingung atau bahkan salah dalam meletakkan sebuah penjelas atau modifier, nah ada caranya lohh. Yuk langsung saja baca dan nambah ilmu ...
1. Misplaced
Modifiers
A
modifier adalah sekelompok kata yang memberi informasi tambahan (penjelas)
kepada kata lain dalam suatu kalimat.
Modifier
harus diletakkan sedekat mungkin dengan kata yang diberi penjelasan. Hal ini
sangat penting untuk diperhatikan, sebab perubahan letak a
modifier akan mengubah arti suatu kalimat.
Perhatikan
beberapa contoh berikut :
e.g ( contoh ) :
1. I told Noura only what I had done.
(I didn’t tell him
anything else.)
2. I told only Noura what I had done.
(I didn’t tell anybody
else.)
3. Only I told Noura what I had done.
(Nobody else told
Noura.)
4. I told Noura only what I had done.
(No one else did it.)
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Ke-empat
kalimat tersebut mempunyai arti yang berbeda karena letak modifier (only) yang
berubah – ubah.
Perhatikan
kalimat – kalimat berikut :
1. I worked
for my father, who owns a sawmill, during the summer.
Kata (phrase) during the summer, memberi
keterangan terhadap apa ? dalam kalimat tersebut tidak jelas. Maka letaknya
harus dipindah, diletakkan sedekat mungkin pada kata yang diterangkan, sehingga
menjadi :
During
the summer, I worked for my father, who owns a sawmill.
2. Fatimah
said on her way out she would give the memo to Fahri.
Did Fatimah say it on her way out ? or is
she going to deliver the memo on her way out ?
Untuk menghindari ketidak jelasan, kita
dapat memindahkan letak modifier sesuai dengan arti yang kita inginkan
- On
her way out, Fatimah said she would give the memo to Fahri.
-
Fatimah said she would give the memo to Fahri on her way out.
Hati – hatilah dengan kata – kata berikut
:
Almost nearly just only even hardly merely scarcely
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Letakkan kata – kata tersebut sebelum kata
yang diterangkan olehnya.
Salah
Benar
Salah
Benar
Salah
Benar
Salah
Benar
Salah
Benar
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: I almost ate the whole
thing.
: I ate almost the whole
thing.
: She just wants to take
one class.
: She wants to take just one
class.
: We only have four
hours to finish this paper.
: We have only four
hours to finish this paper.
: That house nearly cost
sixty thousand dollars.
: That house cost nearly sixty
thousand dollars.
: She was so quite that hardly he
noticed her.
: She was so quite that he hardly noticed
her.
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Perhatikan kalimat – kalimat berikut :
A. 1.
Only he said he loved her.
(No
one else said it.)
2.
He only said he loved her.
(He
said nothing else.)
3.
He said only he loved her.
(No
one else loved her.)
4.
He said he only loved her.
(Loving
her was his sole activity.)
5.
He said he loved only her.
(He
loved no one else.)
B. 1.
Ali held the cat with a smile.
(Who
was smiling ? Ali or the cat ?)
-
With a smile on his face, li held the cat.
2.
Budi discovered a mushroom walking through the garden.
(Who
was walking ?)
-
Walking through the garden, Budi discovered a mushroom.
3.
Last night I went to see my manager in a new skirt.
(Who
was wearing the new skirt ?)
-
Last night I put on my new skirt and went to see my manager.
(Clearly
the speaker was wearing the new skirt.)
2. Dangling
Modifier (Illogical Participal Modifier)
A
dangling modifier terjadi bila tidak ada kata yang tepat yang diberi keterangan
(penjelas) oleh modifier daam suatu kalimat, sehingga kalimat tersebut menjadi
tidak masuk akal (illogical modifier).
1.
salah : After jumping
out of a boat, the shark bit the man.
(We
understand that the actual subject of the verb jumping is the
man: therefore, immediately after comma, we must mention the man .
benar :
After jumping out of a boat, the man was bitten by a shark.
Untuk
menghindari terjadinya Dangling Modifier, maka subyek dari main clause harus
sama dengan subject yang dimaksud dalam introductory phrase; dengan kata lain,
the introductory phrase menerangkan subject dari main clauses.
Perhatikan
kaimat – kalimat berikut ini :
Introductory
phrase main
clause
1. Looking at his watch, Budi got
up and left.
Subject
Who
looked at his watch ? Budi
Who
got up and left ? Budi
Introductory
phrase main
clause
2. Compared to his
father, Ali is a tall man.
Subject
Who
is compared to his father ? Ali
Who
is a tall man ? Ali
Introductory
phrase main
clause
3. To make a collect phone
call, Jono must speak to the operator.
Subject
Who
is making a collect phone call ? Jono
Who
must speak to the operator ? Jono
Seringkali
introductory phrase didahului oleh preposisi berikut ini :
by upon before after while
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e.g
:
1.
After eating dinner, she cleaned the table.
2.
By working ten hours a day for five days, we can have a long weekend.
3.
While reviewing for the test, Fatimah realized that she had
forgotten to return her books.
Jika
introductory phrase berupa (verb + ing) ,maka waktu (tense) dari kalimat
ditentukan oleh tense dari kata kerja dalam main clause, dua kejadian
(peristiwa) biasanya terjadi secara bersama – sama.
( preposition
) + ( noun
) + ( verb + ing
)..... + noun + verb
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Present
: Practicing her swing every day, Umar hopes to get a job as a
golf instructor.
Past
: Having a terrible toothache, Jono called the dentist
for an appointment.
Future
: Finishing the letter tonight, Ani will mail it tomorrow
morning.
Bentuk
Perfect (having + past participle) digunakan untuk menunjukkan bahwa tindakan
(kejadian) pada introductory phrase dilakukan (terjadi) sebelum tindakan
(kejadian) pada main clause.
( not
) + having + past participle
..... + noun + verb
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1. Having
finished their supper, the boys went out to play.
(After
the boys had finished supper, ............)
2. Having
written his composition, Ali handed it to her
teacher.
(After
Ali had written ...............)
3. Not
having read the book, she could not answer the
question.
(Because
she had not read the book............)
Introductory
Phrase (participal phrase) juga dapat digunakan untuk menyatakan gagasan dalam
bentuk pasif.
( not
) + having been + (
past participle )
..... + noun + verb
.....
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1.
Having been notified by the court, Elisa reported for jury duty.
(After
Elisa had been notified, ........ )
2.
Having been delayed by the snowstorm, Rudi and I missed our connecting flight.
(After
we had been delayed, ......... )
3.
Not having been notified of the change in meeting times, Ali arrived late.
(Because
he had not been notified, ...............)
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